NAME: Sònia Ibañez Soussi
TOPIC: Pet Abandonment
PRESENTATION 10 %
• Do you use any resources:
powerpoint, video, images, sound, realmaterial…?Are the resources relevant and
attractive and focused on the topic? Do they support your presentation? Is the
timing 5-7 minutes?
-Yes, in my oral presentation I used a powerpoint and
I think it was relevant, attractive and it focused on the topic, but the timing
of my oral presentation was around 4 minutes.
BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT 10%
• Are you looking at your audience
most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes? Are you doing
any gestures / movement to hold the attention of the audience?
-Yes, I was looking at my audience but I also look at
my teacher. When I was doing my oral presentation I look from my notes a little
bit. The movements I did were to show to the audience the different pictures
about the causes of the abandonments of the animals.
STRUCTURE 10%
• Do you organize your ideas
in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more
clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…).
-Yes, I have organized my ideas
in order of importance. At the beginning of mi presentation I did a little
introduction of what I was going to do, so I used discourse markers.
CONTENT 30%
• Do you introduce
interesting, NEW information to your audience? Is your information detailed and
clear? Do you give / show examples? Is your information copied from a source or
is it original? Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books…?
-When I was preparing my oral presentation, first of
all I looked for information about the causes and the consequences of the
abandonments of all the animals, then I did a summary of the most important
things, and finally I organized the information which were detailed and clear.
lANGUAGE 20%
• Is your grammar correct,
complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class)?Is your vocabulary rich
and varied (synonyms, idioms, phrasal verbs, expressions, topic-related
vocabulary…)?Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also,
furthermore, although, however…)Do you use pause fillers? (well, you know, for
example, one second, repeating a word…).
-My grammar was correct, but some of the words I said
wasn’t well pronounced.
PRONUNCIATION & INTONATION 10&%
• Do you know how to pronounce
all your words? Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate
or the teacher? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the
time? Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
-I checked the pronunciation of some words but not all
of them, that’s for these reason why I didn’t pronounce very well some of them.
SELF-EVALUATION 10%
• Now it’s time to improve for
next presentation. Write down a LITERAL TRANSCRIPTION of your presentation. Check
your language and structure.
Can you correct your mistakes? You are your teacher! What mark did you get?
Pet Abandonment
INTRODUCTION
Good afternoon everybody, as all you know my name is Sònia and today I’m going
to talk about the abandonment of pets, especially about the abandonment of
dogs. First of all, I’m going to explain the causes, secondly I’m going to explain
the consequences and finally I’m going to give my opinion.
Causes…
The main causes of the
abandonment of pets are that families or people fail to take charge and
abandoned them.
The abandonment of pets begins
at Christmas when most of the people give pets to their children or
grandchildren, first it’s so excited especially for the children but in the end
the children and their parents fail to take charge and abandon them. Most of the abandonments take place in summer because families want to go traveling
and don’t know
what to do with their pets,
that is when they decide to leave them where
nobody sees them and
far away from home.
Consequences…
In 2008 there were around
3000 traffic accident caused by the dogs
abandonment in the roads.
If you abandon your
dog you should realize that this could have a physical
or psychological injury, and
he can also die.
Conclusion…
When you
decide to have a pet, you have to consider
that they live around
14, 15 or 16 years... and you should think if you
can charge it or not.
I hope you
have enjoyed this project. And have you got any question?